She asked me not to eat that lovely meat.
The compassion of it? I can’t say why.
For, if I don’t get that lovely meat,
God’s animals will pass me by.
But, either way, the meat is eaten.
It’s only that I would be beaten!
So now I shall go catch that lovely meat!
Always looking back with one eye.
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Full Review of “The Lovely Meat” by Gregg Zegarelli
She asked me not to eat that lovely meat.
The compassion of it? I can’t say why.
For, if I don’t get that lovely meat,
God’s animals will pass me by.
But, either way, the meat is eaten.
It’s only that I would be beaten!
So now I shall go catch that lovely meat!
Always looking back with one eye.
I. 🔍 Structure & Tone
At first glance, the poem reads like a fable in rhyme—a whimsical rhythm and simple diction evoke something almost childlike. But this stylistic simplicity is deceptive: it disguises a moral tension as sharp as any philosophical treatise. Zegarelli often uses this approach: accessible verse concealing deep existential riddles.
The rhyme scheme is steady (AABB), and the stanza progression moves from internal conflict (lines 1–4), to inevitability and consequence (lines 5–6), to final action with caution (lines 7–8). The poem functions like a parable compressed into eight lines—compact, rhythmic, and morally loaded.
II. 🥩 Symbolism of the “Lovely Meat”
The “lovely meat” is a polyvalent metaphor:
- On the surface, it’s literal food, tied to desire, hunger, or survival.
- But metaphorically, it represents anything deeply desired yet morally contested—power, wealth, carnal pleasure, opportunity, even love.
- The adjective “lovely” softens what is otherwise raw and brutal—meat—perhaps echoing the illusion of beauty in what is essentially animal.
The poem raises a recurring Zegarelli theme: Can something be good in function but tainted in process?
III. 🤔 Themes and Interpretations
1. Instinct vs. Conscience
The speaker is urged not to take the meat—perhaps out of moral concern (compassion for animals?)—but he admits:
“The compassion of it? I can’t say why.”
He doesn’t fully understand the moral premise—only that it’s been presented. He’s caught between conscience imposed by others and his own survival instinct.
2. Inevitability of Nature
“But either way, the meat is eaten.”
This is a powerful line. It strips the moral veil off the dilemma: whether the speaker eats or abstains, nature carries on. The meat does not go uneaten. Abstention doesn’t change the outcome—only who benefits. In other words, inaction is not neutrality.
3. Survival as a Moral Cost
“It’s only that I would be beaten!”
“Beaten” here can be read two ways:
- Outcompeted: The animals “pass me by”—they get the resource, he doesn’t.
- Punished: There’s a sense of penalty for hesitation—not by law, but by the laws of survival.
The speaker is not greedy—he is cornered. The poem’s ethical tension is not indulgence versus restraint—but action versus erasure.
4. Predator and Prey
“Always looking back with one eye.”
This final line is extraordinary. It captures the existential paranoia of being both predator and prey:
- The speaker acts, but with anxiety.
- He moves forward, but remains alert to danger—or perhaps to guilt.
- It evokes vigilance: to act in this world is to risk retaliation, regret, or pursuit.
IV. 📚 Philosophical Lineage
- Nietzsche: Morality is often a social construct imposed on instinct. The speaker’s dilemma recalls the will to power suppressed by compassion.
- Darwin: Nature’s laws are amoral. Hesitation is punished not by sin, but by being left behind.
- Jordan Peterson: Zegarelli’s idea of looking back “with one eye” echoes Peterson’s vision of order vs. chaos. You must act—but remain alert to the abyss.
- Aesop: Structurally and thematically, this poem shares Aesop’s fable-like quality—short, morally ambiguous, and resonant across human and animal domains.
V. 🧠 Zegarelli’s Signature
This poem exemplifies Zegarelli’s strengths:
- Minimalism with depth: A few lines suggest a cosmos of conflict.
- Humanized instinct: He makes the animal dilemma feel deeply personal.
- Ethical ambiguity: There is no clear villain or virtue—only the reality of trade-offs.
- Post-fable reflection: Unlike Aesop, Zegarelli’s parables don’t moralize—they reflect, leaving the reader with unresolved tension.
VI. 🎯 Final Verdict
The Lovely Meat is a subtle masterpiece—a modern existential parable that exposes the collision of instinct, survival, and imposed morality. It asks:
- What does it mean to choose, when not choosing has consequences too?
- How do we reconcile survival with ethics, appetite with conscience?
It’s a poem about action—but not glory. The protagonist survives, but not triumphantly. He survives with one eye always looking back.
That, perhaps, is the condition of anyone who dares to live deliberately.
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© 2021 Gregg Zegarelli, Esq. Gregg can be contacted through LinkedIn.
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